Dead Poets Society

Life like a bike

Me! Bike Road and life Honey ! Money Strife And thrife Money ! Petrol Engine And soul Destination ! Role Purpose And goal Me ! Bike Road And life. Hey guys i tried to do something new. I dont know whether it is known type of poem . Please feel free to comment. And give…

Suyash Yewale
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Me! Bike
Road
and life

Honey ! Money
Strife
And thrife

Money ! Petrol
Engine
And soul

Destination ! Role
Purpose
And goal

Me ! Bike
Road
And life.

Hey guys i tried to do something new.
I dont know whether it is known type of poem .
Please feel free to comment.
And give some feedback for improvement

28 responses to “Life like a bike”

  1. Mishike Avatar
    Mishike

    Its cool

    Liked by 3 people

  2. Suyash Avatar
    Suyash

    Thank u

    Liked by 1 person

  3. vabutsy Avatar
    vabutsy

    I think the form works really well with the image — I could feel the turning of the bike’s wheels in your verses.

    Liked by 3 people

  4. michnavs Avatar
    michnavs

    This is a beautiful form..its like an upbeat music..

    Liked by 3 people

  5. Robert M Richburg Avatar
    Robert M Richburg

    This is interesting. I don’t think I have seen this form before.

    Liked by 3 people

  6. ravendude Avatar
    ravendude

    Rhyme scheme is fresh…something like a,b,c then d, c, c then e, f, e then e, g, e then a, b, c. I can dig it! Very cool!! Totally artistic: it’s structured and yet appears unstructured, and the rhyme scheme you devised totally holds it all together.

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  7. Suyash Avatar
    Suyash

    thank u

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Laiba Tanveer Avatar
    Laiba Tanveer

    It is beautiful.

    Liked by 3 people

  9. Suyash Avatar
    Suyash

    Thankyou soo much

    Like

  10. Suyash Avatar
    Suyash

    Would you like to join the club?

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Laiba Tanveer Avatar
    Laiba Tanveer

    definitely.

    Liked by 3 people

  12. Suyash Avatar
    Suyash

    Could you Mail me at suyashyewale@gmail.com

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Suyash Avatar
    Suyash

    So that I could invite you to the club

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Laiba Tanveer Avatar
    Laiba Tanveer

    what should i mail you?

    Liked by 2 people

  15. Suyash Avatar
    Suyash

    Anything

    Like

  16. Laiba Tanveer Avatar
    Laiba Tanveer

    okay.

    Like

  17. glowofmind Avatar
    glowofmind

    Ah! its lovely, a very different feel to it. short and subtle.

    Liked by 2 people

  18. Shreya Jindal Avatar
    Shreya Jindal

    Oh this was like some phrases describing life beautifyly. Well bone!

    Liked by 1 person

  19. Jerry Peri Avatar
    Jerry Peri

    It’s nice!

    Liked by 1 person

  20. Maniparna Sengupta Majumder Avatar
    Maniparna Sengupta Majumder

    Nicely penned…

    Liked by 1 person

  21. Suyash Avatar
    Suyash

    Thanks

    Liked by 1 person

  22. Suyash Avatar
    Suyash

    Thank you very much

    Liked by 1 person

  23. ashanair01 Avatar
    ashanair01

    The poem about bike , verses both a fusion of feeling and wheeling. Superb good.

    Liked by 1 person

  24. Suyash Avatar
    Suyash

    Thank you soo much

    Like

  25. raffyruffruff Avatar
    raffyruffruff

    I like the pacing and the flow of the lines of the poem 😐

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  26. raffyruffruff Avatar
    raffyruffruff

    sorry I clicked wrong emoji 😄

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  27. raffyruffruff Avatar
    raffyruffruff

    I meant to use the 😁 emoji

    Like

  28. krishnapriya108 Avatar
    krishnapriya108

    Really good – simple, sharp and so up-beat — bike, life and journey! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

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