Life like a bike

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Me! Bike
Road
and life

Honey ! Money
Strife
And thrife

Money ! Petrol
Engine
And soul

Destination ! Role
Purpose
And goal

Me ! Bike
Road
And life.

Hey guys i tried to do something new.
I dont know whether it is known type of poem .
Please feel free to comment.
And give some feedback for improvement

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28 Comments Add yours

  1. Mishike says:

    Its cool

    Liked by 3 people

  2. vabutsy says:

    I think the form works really well with the image — I could feel the turning of the bike’s wheels in your verses.

    Liked by 3 people

  3. michnavs says:

    This is a beautiful form..its like an upbeat music..

    Liked by 3 people

  4. Robert M Richburg says:

    This is interesting. I don’t think I have seen this form before.

    Liked by 3 people

  5. ravendude says:

    Rhyme scheme is fresh…something like a,b,c then d, c, c then e, f, e then e, g, e then a, b, c. I can dig it! Very cool!! Totally artistic: it’s structured and yet appears unstructured, and the rhyme scheme you devised totally holds it all together.

    Liked by 3 people

  6. Suyash says:

    Thankyou soo much

    Like

  7. Suyash says:

    Would you like to join the club?

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Suyash says:

    So that I could invite you to the club

    Liked by 1 person

  9. what should i mail you?

    Liked by 2 people

  10. glowofmind says:

    Ah! its lovely, a very different feel to it. short and subtle.

    Liked by 2 people

  11. Oh this was like some phrases describing life beautifyly. Well bone!

    Liked by 1 person

  12. Jerry Peri says:

    It’s nice!

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Suyash says:

    Thank you very much

    Liked by 1 person

  14. ashanair01 says:

    The poem about bike , verses both a fusion of feeling and wheeling. Superb good.

    Liked by 1 person

  15. Suyash says:

    Thank you soo much

    Like

  16. I like the pacing and the flow of the lines of the poem 😐

    Like

  17. sorry I clicked wrong emoji 😄

    Like

  18. I meant to use the 😁 emoji

    Like

  19. Really good – simple, sharp and so up-beat — bike, life and journey! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

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