Life like a bike


Me! Bike
and life

Honey ! Money
And thrife

Money ! Petrol
And soul

Destination ! Role
And goal

Me ! Bike
And life.

Hey guys i tried to do something new.
I dont know whether it is known type of poem .
Please feel free to comment.
And give some feedback for improvement


28 thoughts on “Life like a bike

  1. Rhyme scheme is fresh…something like a,b,c then d, c, c then e, f, e then e, g, e then a, b, c. I can dig it! Very cool!! Totally artistic: it’s structured and yet appears unstructured, and the rhyme scheme you devised totally holds it all together.

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